Chapter 1 discussion!

Shrubwood · Posted: Wed May 14, 2008 10:57 am Post subject:

It looks really nice.
I like the way you draw Master Vignar. Very Happy

Keep going!
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LeoEyes · Posted: Wed May 14, 2008 7:40 pm Post subject:

Thanks Shrubwood Smile

Page eight is up now everyone! Smile

Shrubwood · Posted: Mon May 19, 2008 12:02 pm Post subject:

I must admit I am a little confused about page eight.
Who says these two things in the beginning?
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LeoEyes · Posted: Mon May 19, 2008 2:23 pm Post subject:

Hmm well the first text bubble is Master Vignar speaking and the one to the right and below the second box is Rukel replying to him. Maybe I need to be more clear with it, I can see how it can be confusing.

TTIO · Joined: 24 May 2007 Posts: 80 Location: UK

Seemed clear enough to me, but then I read loads of manga so...

What you could do is put a small speech bubble tip (dunno what they're called) going in what the reader would expect each character to be. I don't know about everyone else, but for me that would be Vignar to the right and Rukel to the bottom.
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LeoEyes · Posted: Mon May 26, 2008 4:41 am Post subject:

Hmm not a bad idea, might help clear up any confusion. Thanks!

Oh and next page is a little late. I just started a brand new job and have been trying to get used to the schedule. Been working alot. Sorry about that guys.

Shrubwood · Posted: Sun Jun 01, 2008 10:40 am Post subject:

No problem.
Take your time. Very Happy

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LeoEyes · Posted: Wed Jun 25, 2008 11:10 pm Post subject:

New page is up!!!

LeoEyes · Posted: Sat Jul 12, 2008 2:52 pm Post subject:

Page 10 is up!!

Shrubwood · Posted: Mon Sep 08, 2008 1:56 am Post subject:

Nice.

The little dragon is especially cute.
I am looking forward to see the next page.
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